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Hi! I'm excited to share my Sims 3 story about a young girl named Gabrielle Hidalgo.
I use the Sims to stage the story. Please feel free to visit!
I could use reviews from some veteran writers :smile:

Click here to read! http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/

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Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:29 am
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This story is pretty cool! Was kinda expecting that part at the end of chapter 2 but i didn't think it would be that severe. :0
Anyways. . .more. :D

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Tue Jun 26, 2012 8:43 am
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Brianne-
Thanks for reading and taking an interest in my story!
Poor Gabby, I was a bit severe wasn't I? I tend to throw myself into situations I write and act out a little too much how I would feel. XD


Chapter 3 is now posted.
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/06/28/chapter-3-no-time-to-breathe/

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Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:55 pm
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Today I thought I'd update my post for anyone who's following my story through this site. I finished two new chapters since I've last updated. I hope you enjoy them! In Chapter 5 we actually get to see the girls as teenagers. I'm having a lot more fun writing about them as they are older. They have much more freedom than children do!

Chapter 4
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/07/chapter-4-sticking-together/

Chapter 5
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/13/chapter-5-twisted-surprises/

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:36 am
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:ahh:
While I was taking photos, my poor Simmies experienced a horrible accident.
Of course since they are Sims and come with back up saves, I think it's perfectly normal for me to laugh at their misfortunes from time to time. :laugh:

:idea: I created an Outtakes post because of this surprise occurrence.
Check it out here >> http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/15/chapter-5-outtakes/

:wave: Warning!! It might be a slight (very slight) spoiler if you have not read Chapter 5.

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I just got caught up with the story. Omg poor Gabby! Also I think Emily and Gabby grew up to be real pretty!

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Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:42 am
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:smile: Thank you Brianne! I was hoping to have the girls fit their personalities, and hopefully they do! You'll see more of their personalities in the upcoming chapters.

:yeah: Next two chapters have been posted! (Actually Chapter 6 was posted last week but I did not link it here.)
I try to post a new chapter on a weekly basis. My goal is to start posting every Wednesday or Thursday but so far it's pretty much been every Friday.

:happy: Anyways! Back to the story!

Chapter 6
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/20/chapter-6-unplanned-evening/

Chapter 7
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/28/chapter-7-punishment/

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Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:58 am
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:wha: Late Chapter!

This chapter is a week late but you can blame the Olympics! :ton:

Chapter 8
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/08/10/chapter-8-searched-and-found/

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Sat Aug 11, 2012 12:42 am
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:party: Hooray new chapter!

I had fun writing this chapter and I'm even more excited to write the next one because the girls are finally... Well you can just see for yourself. :ton:

Chapter 9
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/08/17/chapter-9-thieves-into-the-night/

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Sat Aug 18, 2012 5:14 am
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New Chapter!

I had a lot of fun writing this so I hope you enjoy it as much as I did! :smile:

Chapter 10
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/09/01/chapter-10-first-night-out/

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Just getting started. So far, I quite like it. :)

Will comment more on the blog as I read.

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I'm so happy to have you as a reader Medleymisty!
I hope I don't disappoint you :XD:

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Kaydee wrote:
I'm so happy to have you as a reader Medleymisty!
I hope I don't disappoint you :XD:


You didn't. :) It was an excellent read.

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@Medley- ღღღ


-Finally I have the next chapter out. If you're wondering why I took so long to post, I explain that in the Authorial Interjection before this chapter. :happy:

Chapter 11
http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/09/23/chapter-11-colorful-people/

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Hey, I'm reading your story on wordpress, but I just joined these forums and saw you were here too! Thought I'd stop in and say hi! Your stoy is great :D

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