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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Story 1 - Runners
Hi! I'm excited to share my Sims 3 story about a young girl named Gabrielle Hidalgo. I use the Sims to stage the story. Please feel free to visit! I could use reviews from some veteran writers Click here to read! http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:29 am |
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~Brianne~
Sim Goddess
Joined: Wed Apr 01, 2009 4:37 am Posts: 1106 Location: Texas
Name: Brianne
Age: 16
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
This story is pretty cool! Was kinda expecting that part at the end of chapter 2 but i didn't think it would be that severe. :0 Anyways. . .more. :D
_________________I don't believe there really is fate or destiny, just hopes and dreams to look forward to accomplishing one day. My Tumblr We're all weird people looking for other weird people to share our weirdness with.
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| Tue Jun 26, 2012 8:43 am |
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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
Brianne- Thanks for reading and taking an interest in my story! Poor Gabby, I was a bit severe wasn't I? I tend to throw myself into situations I write and act out a little too much how I would feel. XD Chapter 3 is now posted. http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/06/28/chapter-3-no-time-to-breathe/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:55 pm |
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Kaydee
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
Today I thought I'd update my post for anyone who's following my story through this site. I finished two new chapters since I've last updated. I hope you enjoy them! In Chapter 5 we actually get to see the girls as teenagers. I'm having a lot more fun writing about them as they are older. They have much more freedom than children do! Chapter 4 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/07/chapter-4-sticking-together/Chapter 5 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/13/chapter-5-twisted-surprises/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:36 am |
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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
 While I was taking photos, my poor Simmies experienced a horrible accident. Of course since they are Sims and come with back up saves, I think it's perfectly normal for me to laugh at their misfortunes from time to time.  I created an Outtakes post because of this surprise occurrence. Check it out here >> http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/15/chapter-5-outtakes/  Warning!! It might be a slight (very slight) spoiler if you have not read Chapter 5.
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:00 pm |
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~Brianne~
Sim Goddess
Joined: Wed Apr 01, 2009 4:37 am Posts: 1106 Location: Texas
Name: Brianne
Age: 16
Gender: Female
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I just got caught up with the story. Omg poor Gabby! Also I think Emily and Gabby grew up to be real pretty!
_________________I don't believe there really is fate or destiny, just hopes and dreams to look forward to accomplishing one day. My Tumblr We're all weird people looking for other weird people to share our weirdness with.
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| Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:42 am |
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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
 Thank you Brianne! I was hoping to have the girls fit their personalities, and hopefully they do! You'll see more of their personalities in the upcoming chapters.  Next two chapters have been posted! (Actually Chapter 6 was posted last week but I did not link it here.) I try to post a new chapter on a weekly basis. My goal is to start posting every Wednesday or Thursday but so far it's pretty much been every Friday.  Anyways! Back to the story! Chapter 6 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/20/chapter-6-unplanned-evening/Chapter 7 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/07/28/chapter-7-punishment/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:58 am |
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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Late Chapter! This chapter is a week late but you can blame the Olympics! Chapter 8 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/08/10/chapter-8-searched-and-found/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sat Aug 11, 2012 12:42 am |
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Kaydee
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:19 am Posts: 10
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
 Hooray new chapter! I had fun writing this chapter and I'm even more excited to write the next one because the girls are finally... Well you can just see for yourself. Chapter 9 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/08/17/chapter-9-thieves-into-the-night/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sat Aug 18, 2012 5:14 am |
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Kaydee
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
New Chapter! I had a lot of fun writing this so I hope you enjoy it as much as I did! Chapter 10 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/09/01/chapter-10-first-night-out/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sat Sep 01, 2012 7:15 pm |
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Medleymisty
Roomie
Joined: Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:29 pm Posts: 66 Location: Charlotte, NC
Name: Stacy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
Just getting started. So far, I quite like it. :)
Will comment more on the blog as I read.
_________________ a tale of fire, insanity, and love completed
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| Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:00 am |
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Kaydee
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I'm so happy to have you as a reader Medleymisty! I hope I don't disappoint you 
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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| Sun Sep 23, 2012 6:10 am |
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Medleymisty
Roomie
Joined: Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:29 pm Posts: 66 Location: Charlotte, NC
Name: Stacy
Age: 28
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Kaydee wrote: I'm so happy to have you as a reader Medleymisty! I hope I don't disappoint you  You didn't. :) It was an excellent read.
_________________ a tale of fire, insanity, and love completed
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| Sun Sep 23, 2012 6:26 am |
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Kaydee
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 Re: Story 1 - Runners
@Medley- ღღღ -Finally I have the next chapter out. If you're wondering why I took so long to post, I explain that in the Authorial Interjection before this chapter. Chapter 11 http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/2012/09/23/chapter-11-colorful-people/
_________________Writing is a struggle against silence. -Carlos Fuentes My struggle - http://storiesbykaydee.wordpress.com/
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Kathleen
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Joined: Fri Oct 12, 2012 11:06 am Posts: 73 Location: Australia
Name: Kathleen
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Hey, I'm reading your story on wordpress, but I just joined these forums and saw you were here too! Thought I'd stop in and say hi! Your stoy is great :D
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| Fri Oct 12, 2012 12:57 pm |
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